Armin Kamsi

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(Spec Script) Rick and Morty Season 6 Premiere: Morty What You Bargained For Draft #1

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Rick gets captured by a mysterious person. Morty has to figure out how to use the portal gun.
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"Tarot" Season 1 Episode 1 - "Pilot" Draft #1

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Tarot goes crazy over a card.
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"Tarot" Season 1 Episode 2 - Tarot-ibbly In Love" Draft #1

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Adele sees something in Tarot. Maria and Gary don't see something in each other.
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ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

"Tarot" Season 1 Episode 2 - Tarot-ibbly In Love" television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Family
Adele sees something in Tarot. Maria and Gary don't see something in each other.
ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

"Tarot" Season 1 Episode 1 - "Pilot" television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Animation,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Tarot goes crazy over a card.
ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

"Tarot" Season 1 Episode 1: "Pilot" television
Genre: Animation,Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Tarot goes crazy over a card.
ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

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The Elements E01 television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Drama
Rating: 53%
I would like to say that overall, this is a good pilot. It brings the characters all together and provides us with a fulfilling story for each one, but not revealing too much backstory either, perfect. For me, the high points of your writing come from your ability to create and explain characters, even ones that aren't or don't seem significant to the plot or story. I'd say your low point is your dialogue, although it's decent, it could definitely use some work when trying to relate these characters to your readers. Some of the things they say seem out of place. But with all that being said, I'm excited and hooked for episode 2! My favorite characters are Pedro and Eric, I like Pedro's fiery attitude and Eric is just a cool guy that seems fun to hang out with, but not to get in a fight with haha. Keep going!
ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

The Elements E01 television
Genre: Action/Adventure,Drama
A group of four elemental based people are assembled by Jordan O'Brien to expose The Illuminati.
ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

(Spec Script) Rick and Morty Season 6 Premiere: Morty What You Bargained For television
Genre: Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Rick gets captured by a mysterious person. Morty has to figure out how to use the portal gun.
ArminKamsi
Armin Kamsi 1 year ago

just joined ScriptMother!