Tyke Spaide

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Misty River Draft #1

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Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
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Tyke Spaide 5 years ago

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Postman's Etiquette short
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
Rating: 27%
The concept is differently original. Although I would categorize it under Sci-Fi and a Rom Com, not Suspense and Mystery. The log line stays true for the overall concept of the piece. The pacing of some scenes were really fast it's like they're driving romantically all the sudden her head's in his crotch or they're staring out the window now they're in bed. I really disliked the whole concept of Aksel, he had this amazing ability and I was all for him using it to spy on the government, but as soon as it turned into trying to impress Trine and focused on that I turned into a Rom Com. If you took the path of he becomes a spy and that Trine was sent from the government to neutralize him and at the end she like drugs him or something like that that would be more appealing. But just having her be seduced by one of the agents who hired him just to make him happy just cheapens her character. I mean she already knew how to shoot a gun so the bricks are there to make her an assassin. I'm assuming he going to try to woo her again at the end, although he knows she was basically lying to him says a lot about the type of girl she is and to me it didn't make sense for him to want to pursue her again.
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Tyke Spaide 5 years ago

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Misty River television
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
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Tyke Spaide 5 years ago

uploaded a script.

Misty River television
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
TykeSpaide
Tyke Spaide 5 years ago

uploaded a script.

Misty River television
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
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Tyke Spaide 5 years ago

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