Rich Kambak

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DRAMA/BIOPIC/WAR

STUDIO PRODUCTIONS ASSISTANT TO RAY STARK/RAYSTAR PRODUCTIONS - FAT CITY VIDEOGPAPHY TELLY AWARD - DIRECTOR: HURRICANE ANDREW: IN THE AFTERMATH THEATER EDGE CITY MYSTERIES - 30+ THEATRICAL PRODUCTIONS - FOUNDER, PRODUCER, DIRECTOR, WRITER; PLAYWRIGHT 'TIPS' NOMINATED BEST ONE ACT PLAY IN CALIFORNIA PLAYWRIGHT COMPETITION SCRIPT READER - COMEDY SERIES BBC CHANNEL 4

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Rich Kambak uploaded a script.
1 year ago
FOR THE GOOD FIGHT feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Romance,War
Logline: A biopic of historical swashbuckling war story focused on the 7th Kosciuszko Escadrille, an all-volunteer (American and Canadian) squadron to defend Poland during the Polish-Bolshevik War of 1920.
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1 year ago
Chain Link (First 15) feature
Genre: Horror
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TITLE: CHAIN LETTER (2020) AUTHOR: CYLE BROOKS GENRE: HORROR SCRIPT STRUCTURE*: REAL-TIME (The causality of whatever conflicts are thrown at the characters is presented in real time.) LISTED AS "FULL FEATURE" BUT ONLY 16 PAGES LONG! COMMENTS: · OPENING: STATUS QUO – Need an EST. shot since CHAIN LINK hasn’t been introduced. Such as: INT. FILTHY SURGICAL LAB - PATIENT ON TABLE – (TIME OF DAY?) · “BOOM” OMIT · NEED OPTIC OF COMPUTER – “MONITOR” · REWRITE TO ACTIVE VOICE: “appears to simply enjoy the torture” - “Thrives on the torture.” · Script title: SUPER: · Be careful using similar names beginning with the same letter: JEANETTE and JENNIFER and JOSHUA; reader can get lost in tracking who's who · OMIT: Using audio inserts. Include them into your Scene Action · TEXT: This is a device visual not dialogue - rewrite to correct format · Good lead in to OFFICER COLEMEN from Jennifer’s dialogue · Suggested rewrite on characters in Scene Action: OFFICER MANDY (uniform accents her slim figure, early 30s) OFFICER COLEMAN (Black, sturdy, determined, late 40s) · SCENE HEADER – A transitional optical shot is best too present as : INT./EXT. when coming outside to an inside location · CRIMINAL – How do we know it’s a Criminal because he’s handcuffed? Revise to an Arrested Suspect – unless he’s a WANTED CRIMINAL · Adverbs don’t go at the end of the sentence. · Suggestion: Why not open with the police finding Justin’s body first. This is a good set up to drive the momentum forward and urgency to find the creep who tortured Justin and mutilated his face. · You need to mention “FORENSICS” · Rylie/Chain Link fight - porcelain smash to the head can cause a skull fracture. Has potential but I felt ripped off because you didn't write a "feature".

Rich Kambak just claimed a review for a script.
1 year ago
Chain Link (First 15) feature
Genre: Horror
Logline: Teens learn the hard way that if they don't comply and pass on the messages, they pay the price for breaking the link.
Rich Kambak just joined ScriptMother!
1 year ago

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FOR THE GOOD FIGHT
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Genre: Action/Adventure,Romance,War
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A biopic of historical swashbuckling war story focused on the 7th Kosciuszko Escadrille, an all-volunteer (American and Canadian) squadron to defend Poland during the Polish-Bolshevik War of 1920.

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