Darren Crisis

Darren C.

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Darren Crisis 3 years ago

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Tidal High television
Genre: Drama,Comedy,Family
Rating: 93%
This script was excellent, it reminds me of Glee mixed with Modern Family, in a fresh spin. The characters are not developed as much as some, like when you compare Jacob to the rest of the cast, his character is the only one that is flat out got any real depth to him. But you've planted seeds throughout the script about what the series would look like, with Santia's moral argument to Mason's tourment. The story flows at a real nice pace, with many of the stories with the characters being told or sometimes crossing over like at the Lunch Scene where the Cheerleaders interact with Jacob and Mason for the first time. Some of the characters don't much to say, that is not a bad thing. But as it's crowded already with characters, I would recommend removing the character of Ruby for further her character. The way that everyone interacts with each other, offers some light. But the one main thing I don't like about this script is the fact, that each character has half a page for their personality, you can chop this down. To make it even more fast pace, but I do think that this will end up on TV. As the story had me gripped from the beginning. The way that the script was written allowed a lot of room, for characters and personal stories to be taken further. The setting is often the main point of the script, but in this case I feel like you have used the setting to help with the story.
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Tidal High television
Genre: Drama,Comedy,Family
Welcome to Tidal High, where drama is always happing. Follow along with Jacob, Mason, Holly and Ruby as they navigate their way through high school with their teacher Courtney Garcia.
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Bread and Circuses - #CarpeNoctem television
Genre: Comedy,Thriller
When his best friend is suddenly put on the path to stardom, a writer realizes that Hollywood may be hiding some strange secrets.
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Miss Direction (Pilot) television
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Romance,Drama
A down- on- her luck novice mystery writer impersonates a reclusive world-renowned mystery writer in order to claim a two million dollar reward for solving a case. In over her head, she realizes she must find the real mystery writer.
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Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" television
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they recount the events in which Rosh meets his crush, Tracy.
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