I find the concept to be fair, nothing new, but still fair. The story was just not my thing, I found it miserably predictable and I wanted to not continue reading, but the characters and the structure kept me going. The dialogue was weird, most of the time when Gambino talks, and is doing an action you call him just that... Then their is a part where you called him Albertson in a different action!! and then you call Alfred Albert in one scene and then the rest you call him Alfred. The way they talk is a little bit how children talk.. At the end when Anna poisons Abigail, it seems like Abigail was about to die from a stroke, why the poison, if she wanted Abigail to die a slow and painful death, as stroke would do it. try to write another draft with a more realistic ending.. Erez
Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.
Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.
A ghostly, demon like X-Men type story with the beginning starts in a foggy day. Then a girl has an X-men demon type experience.