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Timothy Boissey

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Mother and I feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Horror
Logline: Violet, a princess in the distant future, must pass several dangerous tests to rejoin society or lose her royal crown and be sent to The Despoiler for her royal punishment.
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Bugged feature
Genre: Horror
Logline: Three burglars who target houses with fumigation tents end up uncovering a much darker pestilence.
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Monster Fever short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: An ill young man gets an unexpected visit from a closet monster.
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The Drive short
Genre: Drama,Crime
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Logline: Three burglars who target houses with fumigation tents end up uncovering a much darker pestilence.
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Logline: Three burglars who target houses with fumigation tents end up uncovering a much darker pestilence.
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A Rogue Story television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller,Action/Adventure
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The script is boldly imaginative and clearly has come from a writer who has spent an impressive amount of time considering every minutia of the fantasy world they have constructed. This helps the worldbuilding of the piece to feel more effective and immersive. The prose is well crafted throughout and effectively uses visual language to paint a clear, cinematic sense of what the show's finished aesthetic will be. The dialogue is well crafted throughout the pilot. Characters each speak in distinct and recognizable voices that suit their established characterizations nicely. There was a wonderful sense of the fantasy world and period built into the characters' speech, making it feel effectively removed from our own reality. There is some good initiative shown at worldbuilding and an interesting metaphor about the events of the script being a story within a story, but this could perhaps be expanded upon more to reveal something deeper about the knowledge possessed by Wren or the secrets he is trying to unlock. The action scenes are also exciting and also help to further advance the plot and reveal more about the world of the story. There is a growing demand for epic fantasy series - both animated and live-action in the wake of Game of Thrones ending and a race to find out who will be the next one. However, it’s also easy to end up being accused of just being a GoT knockoff, so some of the basic mythology and worldbuilding could probably be improved to create an environment that isn’t quite like anything we’ve seen before - both the basic landscape - whether largely seaside, sylvan, or mountainous regions, as well as architecture and even the cultures and religious beliefs that make this civilization unique, and the basic rules for how fantasy works in this world - the rules for magical powers and their limits, as well as what mythical beings exist, such as the giants, and how their existence is possible in order to make-believe in this world possible. It can also work as a parody of sword and sorcery, but this would have to be reflected in changes to the plot as well - perhaps Jhon is captured rather than slain by the mysterious forces at work. Perhaps the best way to clarify this for yourself is to understand what demographic you’re most hoping to win over and what their tastes are.

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A Modest Adventure
Draft #1
Genre: Family
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When 12-year-old MODEST helps his friend ANSEL(12) escape the clutches of his drunken uncle, they lose each other in the mysterious redwood forest, where each of them sets off on a wild adventure in the hopes of reuniting.

Uncle Buddy
Draft #5
Genre: Action/Adventure
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Pursued by deadly space kittens, the cosmos’s most notorious idiot and his nephew find a hidden stash of weed during their efforts to save the last members of a dying race of alien pugs.

Second Star
Draft #3
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Family
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Under the greatest threat of its existence Neverland cries out for a new hero, and she's bringing friends.

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Straight On 'Til
Draft #1
Genre: Thriller
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Auguste runs away from home to avoid growing up and does the one thing no child should ever do.

Ghost Nation
Draft #2
Genre: Western
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Dalton has everything taken from him in a single day then rides out to start over only to end up in a town under attack by possessed Indians.

Rest Stop
Draft #1
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
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Two criminals come to the end of their run.

Sex, Lies, Dinner & Dessert
Draft #1
Genre: Crime,Mystery/Suspense
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A dangerous dinner event is run by two lovers, each with their own agenda.

The Baxter Method
Draft #1
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Comedy
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Time-traveling, temporal disturbances, alien abductions, or something darker?

Natural Enemy
Draft #1
Genre: Comedy,Horror
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A bizarre date leads to a severe allergy attack.

The Ding-Ling Bro's
Draft #1
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy
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Two hapless twenty-something's enter the world of amateur wrestling to fulfill a family wish.

Bugged
Draft #4
Genre: Horror
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Three burglars who target houses with fumigation tents end up uncovering a much darker pestilence.

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