Dan Harris

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Reviewer Rating: | Screenplays: 3 | Reviews: 1

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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Review Rating:
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation

Overall I thought this was a very interesting story with a great protagonist in 'Cobb.' One of my favourite parts of the whole screenplay is the opening scene when Peter is giving him the watch. Its gripping, carries a lot of emotion and really hooks you in for the rest of the story. The dialogue in this screenplay is excellent and I never felt like it was fake, I really believed the characters. My only points to consider would be.. How do the two men who bribe Cobb know that he needs the money for his son? Is this not private to Cobb? Or was it in the newspapers? like does the whole village know about his situation? Also, Shouldn't Cobb regardless of his situation be able to use the bribe and murder plot as means of evidence for convicting Walo Wrenn? I thought it may have been interesting to see if he could double cross them? By speaking to Joss and formulating another plan? Overall this is an excellent screenplay and it was a joy to read. I can imagine it making a great short film.

Dan Harris just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation
Dan Harris just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
Meat The Family + Meat My Uncle Short Story 37 pgs. short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.
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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.

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Draft #3 | Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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The choice
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Dan Harris

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Reviewer Rating: | Screenplays: 3 | Reviews: 1

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Draft #3 | Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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1 week ago | reviews | 13 pages
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The choice
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A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
2 days ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
4 days ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
Dan Harris completed a review for
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Review Rating:
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation

Overall I thought this was a very interesting story with a great protagonist in 'Cobb.' One of my favourite parts of the whole screenplay is the opening scene when Peter is giving him the watch. Its gripping, carries a lot of emotion and really hooks you in for the rest of the story. The dialogue in this screenplay is excellent and I never felt like it was fake, I really believed the characters. My only points to consider would be.. How do the two men who bribe Cobb know that he needs the money for his son? Is this not private to Cobb? Or was it in the newspapers? like does the whole village know about his situation? Also, Shouldn't Cobb regardless of his situation be able to use the bribe and murder plot as means of evidence for convicting Walo Wrenn? I thought it may have been interesting to see if he could double cross them? By speaking to Joss and formulating another plan? Overall this is an excellent screenplay and it was a joy to read. I can imagine it making a great short film.

Dan Harris just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation
Dan Harris just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
Meat The Family + Meat My Uncle Short Story 37 pgs. short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.