Tracy Carracedo

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Reviewer Rating: N/A | Screenplays: 1 | Reviews: 1

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Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
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Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
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6 days ago
Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
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After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.

Alternative is an action-packed, imaginative action movie that is equal parts buddy comedy, action thriller, and horror movie. I love the premise, and I think with some tweaks this can be a great script. The description of the fight scenes was superb, the writer clearly has an understanding of writing action. Also, the dialogue was authentic; and I the more I read it I felt like I knew these two characters simply because of the uniqueness and crispness of their dialogue. Characters: The writer did a good job creating different characters that were each unique but equally menacing. The description of each character's features was very vivid and realistic. An area where I was slightly confused was the relationship between Richard and Michelle. I wasn't sure if the writer was trying to paint a story of hidden love or a previous relationship. I think this part of the script needs some additional work to bring to light the writer's intentions. Also, i understand the reason for the flashbacks with Richard, but I feel they are not crucial. Perhaps this backstory can be brought to the forefront with early dialogue between Richard and Josh talking about Richard's past? In closing, this script has an awesome premise that I think is commercially viable, especially in today's Hollywood (especially at only 70 pages!). The pacing was good and the action keeps it moving nicely. And the ending was very fitting. Just work on the relationship between Michelle and Richard and perhaps substitute the flashbacks. Great job!

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Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.
Tracy Carracedo uploaded a feature screenplay
1 week ago
One Moment in Time feature
Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
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Draft #1 | Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
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Tracy Carracedo

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Draft #1 | Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
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1 week ago | 1 reviews | 119 pages
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A review was just purchased for a feature script. Claim it here.
4 days ago
feature
Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
A review was just purchased for a feature script. Claim it here.
6 days ago
feature
Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
Tracy Carracedo completed a review for
6 days ago
Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
Review Rating:
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.

Alternative is an action-packed, imaginative action movie that is equal parts buddy comedy, action thriller, and horror movie. I love the premise, and I think with some tweaks this can be a great script. The description of the fight scenes was superb, the writer clearly has an understanding of writing action. Also, the dialogue was authentic; and I the more I read it I felt like I knew these two characters simply because of the uniqueness and crispness of their dialogue. Characters: The writer did a good job creating different characters that were each unique but equally menacing. The description of each character's features was very vivid and realistic. An area where I was slightly confused was the relationship between Richard and Michelle. I wasn't sure if the writer was trying to paint a story of hidden love or a previous relationship. I think this part of the script needs some additional work to bring to light the writer's intentions. Also, i understand the reason for the flashbacks with Richard, but I feel they are not crucial. Perhaps this backstory can be brought to the forefront with early dialogue between Richard and Josh talking about Richard's past? In closing, this script has an awesome premise that I think is commercially viable, especially in today's Hollywood (especially at only 70 pages!). The pacing was good and the action keeps it moving nicely. And the ending was very fitting. Just work on the relationship between Michelle and Richard and perhaps substitute the flashbacks. Great job!

Tracy Carracedo just claimed a review for a feature script
1 week ago
Alternative (Rough Draft) feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Comedy
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.
Tracy Carracedo uploaded a feature screenplay
1 week ago
One Moment in Time feature
Genre: Drama,Family
When his life spirals out of control, a motivational speaker is forced to analyze his past, his morals, and his priorities in order to reinvent himself.
Tracy Carracedo just joined ScriptMother!
1 week ago

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Welcome to Script Mother, Tracy! Don't forget to follow us on social media @scriptmother and subscribe to our newsletter for all of our latest updates and opportunities.
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