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Wanting to know about a writer because you like their work, is a little like wanting to know about a duck because you like paté. Darren White is a British writer. Raised in the heart of Robin Hood country, he read Computer Science at University. In 1999 his screenplay for "glorious" was long short-listed in the Orange / Pathé screen writing competition. He is a Chartered Information Technology Professional, a Chartered Member of the British Computer Society and an Incorporated Engineer. He has an interest in popular physics, molecular biology, astro physics, technology and computing. He knows just enough to type the right words into Google. All he has ever wanted to do is entertain. Oh, and own a kidney shaped dance floor. Quarter Finalist: 2020 Page International Screenwriting Awards & 2020 Screencraft Horror screenplay competitions.


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Scripts: 11
Reviews: 1

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Land of Fear feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: An AI expert must use her lifetime's work to find a cure for a rabies outbreak, that threatens to push humanity to the edge of extinction. But can she save humanity from it's greatest threat - itself?
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1 month ago
Temptation of Billy Cooper short
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Western
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Full disclosure. I hate westerns. They've been done to death. It's not a very important part of history, but it's all that American's really have, so they fixate on it. Having said that, I am so glad that I read this. It literally took my breath away. As soon as I realized where the ending was going I became anxious about Carrie's fate and exhilarated at the audacity and cold-blooded nature of his decision.My heart raced. You also strung it out long enough to raise hopes that he would change his mind. Well done, you really made me feel heightened emotions at the end, and that's the whole purpose. I also felt for the two leads, and they certainly had an arc. The three would-be kidnappers felt a little out of central casting though. Can you think of anything we've not seen before to differentiate them? It also suffered from killing off the main antagonist early. It was very evocative and I felt transported, so great voice and consistent sense of controlled tone. It wasn't perfect though (yet), either technically (see below) or as a story. I felt it lagged a little in the shoot outs. The shoot out was 16 pages, about 40% of the story. It's well done, and is engaging, and is obviously a big part of why the ending works, but anything that can be done to make it more unique would be welcome. It would probably play better than it reads. You only describe Carrie in terms of her physical attributes. This is frowned upon. What are her traits? What's she like as a person? Also, you have to call her Carrie in the dialogue from the start, even if we don't know her name yet. The shared laugh on page 10 feels unearned and as if it came out of no where. As does the raising of his hand, and argument on page 12 -13. It might need a little more build up. The conflict didn't feel genuine. Digging out a bullet to save someone is such a trope / cliche. It only exists in movies. Surgeons often leave bullets in place so the patient doesn't bleed out. The bullet could be all that's stopping further bleeding. It would actually be more unexpected / unique to leave it there, or stitch him up, after all, it has "stopped bleeding." Or maybe they don't know any better? Carrie's shirt buttons popping on page 29 feels a little soft core porn. Also, Billy's not a virgin (bottom of page 29) but he's not seen bare breasts before? That seems unlikely. Also, page 31, wouldn't carry have evidence if she'd been violated? Wouldn't she know? Overall, it's good and I look forward to reading more from you.

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Temptation of Billy Cooper short
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Western
Logline: An out-of-work cowboy rescues the daughter of a cattle baron from three would-be kidnappers. Maybe he would’ve been better off letting them recapture and ransom her.
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2 months ago
Land of Fear feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: An AI expert must use her lifetime's work to find a cure for a rabies outbreak, that threatens to push humanity to the edge of extinction. But can she save humanity from it's greatest threat - itself?
Darren White just purchased a review. Claim it here
2 months ago
Land of Fear feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: An AI expert must use her lifetime's work to find a cure for a rabies outbreak, that threatens to push humanity to the edge of extinction. But can she save humanity from it's greatest threat - itself?
Darren White uploaded a script.
3 months ago
Glorious feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Mystery/Suspense,Horror
Logline: A traumatised ex-soldier, awakes stranded on a space station with six strangers, their memories wiped, orbiting a star about to explode in a deadly supernova. To escape, he must unravel a dark mystery in a frantic race against time.
Darren White uploaded a script.
3 months ago
Out of Time feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: Senior Professor. Parkinson's Disease. Middle-age. Road-trip. Revelation. Redemption. Oh, and time travel. Obviously.
Darren White uploaded a script.
3 months ago
Land of Fear feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: An AI expert must use her lifetime's work to find a cure for a rabies outbreak, that threatens to push humanity to the edge of extinction. But can she save humanity from it's greatest threat - itself?
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Land of Fear
Draft #7
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
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An AI expert must use her lifetime's work to find a cure for a rabies outbreak, that threatens to push humanity to the edge of extinction. But can she save humanity from it's greatest threat - itself?

Out of Time
Draft #1
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
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Senior Professor. Parkinson's Disease. Middle-age. Road-trip. Revelation. Redemption. Oh, and time travel. Obviously.

Glorious
Draft #3
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Mystery/Suspense,Horror
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A traumatised ex-soldier, awakes stranded on a space station with six strangers, their memories wiped, orbiting a star about to explode in a deadly supernova. To escape, he must unravel a dark mystery in a frantic race against time.

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