Sophie Leonard

Well-Developed Character

Reviewer Rating: | Screenplays: 0 | Reviews: 4

I like writing scripts, directing, and acting. I also like reading.

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Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
4 days ago
When The Bell Jangles short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
Sophie Leonard completed a review for
1 week ago
The D'Angelo Way short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
Review Rating:
An unscrupulous journalist sets out to uncover the secret of a fitness guru’s eternal youth. It's not the healthiest decision he could have made.

The concept of this script really good. It drew me in and interested me. It feels like a good short film. The first few pages held my attention and compelled me to finish the script. The scenes are well written as well. The main scene where he does the interview was long, but you wrote it well and it didn't feel like it was drawn out. I like all the characters very much since they all feel realistic, even the robot. The dialogue is also good. Luca's dialogue doesn't feel fake. It really sounds like one of the fitness guys I see on tv. I like the conflict as well. I think that it seems realistic that Luca is allowing Carl to interview him and that Sara doesn't want him too. The only thing I'm confused about is what exactly happened in the end. The deal they made wasn't exactly explained. So Carl didn't write the story about the robot? If so, why is he doing this? Couldn't he just leave? Besides that. I think this is a really good script.

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The D'Angelo Way short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
An unscrupulous journalist sets out to uncover the secret of a fitness guru’s eternal youth. It's not the healthiest decision he could have made.
Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
Meat The Family + Meat My Uncle Short Story 37 pgs. short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.
Sophie Leonard completed a review for
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Review Rating:
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation

I think the concept of this script was interesting and thought-provoking. It's one of those scripts that you're still thinking about days later. The logline really drew me in and the beginning caught my attention. The only thing I would say is that when Chet talks about Joss it is a bit confusing. I would do a flashback of that actual night and show what happened with Chet narrating. Besides that one, the scenes were written really well and I liked how you cut to different people in the end. The protagonist was really good because I felt for him and it was almost like I had to make the choice as well. Maybe show one or two more scenes with Peter in between to kind of show him wanting Cobb. The dialogue is pretty realistic, which made the characters feel genuine. The end was also really good and the plot was very well structured.

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation
Sophie Leonard completed a review for
1 week ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.

This script caught my attention but didn't hold it for long. I think the concept was really good but the actual script dragged on and it was kind of boring. The dialogue wasn't very realistic either and dit felt very forced. If the dialogue was changed a little bit and the story arc was fixed then this would be a pretty good script. There isn't really a plot. I think that Rosh and Sal were a little stereotypical, but it does kind of make sense in this story, so that is fine. I think this felt a lot more like a cheesy Disney show than a popular comedy. I think that the characters are pretty good, just like the story. I would add more obstacles in the way of the goal. Also, I was very confused while reading the script, especially in the cafeteria scene. If it explained everything a little bit better than I would be able to visualize it better. My only other note about the characters is to make them a little bit more dynamic and different. They felt a little similar and I couldn't really feel for them. Overall, I think many people would this concept but the characters need to be adjusted just a little bit along with the dialogue, which I felt was not very realistic. Also, make the scenes easier to understand so people can visualize what they would see on the screen. With a few small adjustments, this could be an amazing show.

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a television script
1 week ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.
Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a television script
1 week ago
Dream of Mirrors tv series
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Mystery/Suspense,Horror
In a future where ​super-powered​ children are forced to eliminate the enemies of the state, a precog girl must confront terrifying supernatural forces in order to save her family.
Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a television script
1 week ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.

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The choice
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Sophie Leonard

Well-Developed Character

Reviewer Rating: | Screenplays: 0 | Reviews: 4

I like writing scripts, directing, and acting. I also like reading.

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The choice
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Recent Activity

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
4 days ago
When The Bell Jangles short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
Sophie Leonard completed a review for
1 week ago
The D'Angelo Way short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
Review Rating:
An unscrupulous journalist sets out to uncover the secret of a fitness guru’s eternal youth. It's not the healthiest decision he could have made.

The concept of this script really good. It drew me in and interested me. It feels like a good short film. The first few pages held my attention and compelled me to finish the script. The scenes are well written as well. The main scene where he does the interview was long, but you wrote it well and it didn't feel like it was drawn out. I like all the characters very much since they all feel realistic, even the robot. The dialogue is also good. Luca's dialogue doesn't feel fake. It really sounds like one of the fitness guys I see on tv. I like the conflict as well. I think that it seems realistic that Luca is allowing Carl to interview him and that Sara doesn't want him too. The only thing I'm confused about is what exactly happened in the end. The deal they made wasn't exactly explained. So Carl didn't write the story about the robot? If so, why is he doing this? Couldn't he just leave? Besides that. I think this is a really good script.

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The D'Angelo Way short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
An unscrupulous journalist sets out to uncover the secret of a fitness guru’s eternal youth. It's not the healthiest decision he could have made.
Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
Meat The Family + Meat My Uncle Short Story 37 pgs. short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.
Sophie Leonard completed a review for
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Review Rating:
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation

I think the concept of this script was interesting and thought-provoking. It's one of those scripts that you're still thinking about days later. The logline really drew me in and the beginning caught my attention. The only thing I would say is that when Chet talks about Joss it is a bit confusing. I would do a flashback of that actual night and show what happened with Chet narrating. Besides that one, the scenes were written really well and I liked how you cut to different people in the end. The protagonist was really good because I felt for him and it was almost like I had to make the choice as well. Maybe show one or two more scenes with Peter in between to kind of show him wanting Cobb. The dialogue is pretty realistic, which made the characters feel genuine. The end was also really good and the plot was very well structured.

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The choice short
Genre: Crime,Drama
Can everybody stay in the right path even in the worst possible situation
Sophie Leonard completed a review for
1 week ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.

This script caught my attention but didn't hold it for long. I think the concept was really good but the actual script dragged on and it was kind of boring. The dialogue wasn't very realistic either and dit felt very forced. If the dialogue was changed a little bit and the story arc was fixed then this would be a pretty good script. There isn't really a plot. I think that Rosh and Sal were a little stereotypical, but it does kind of make sense in this story, so that is fine. I think this felt a lot more like a cheesy Disney show than a popular comedy. I think that the characters are pretty good, just like the story. I would add more obstacles in the way of the goal. Also, I was very confused while reading the script, especially in the cafeteria scene. If it explained everything a little bit better than I would be able to visualize it better. My only other note about the characters is to make them a little bit more dynamic and different. They felt a little similar and I couldn't really feel for them. Overall, I think many people would this concept but the characters need to be adjusted just a little bit along with the dialogue, which I felt was not very realistic. Also, make the scenes easier to understand so people can visualize what they would see on the screen. With a few small adjustments, this could be an amazing show.

Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a television script
1 week ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.
Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a television script
1 week ago
Dream of Mirrors tv series
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Mystery/Suspense,Horror
In a future where ​super-powered​ children are forced to eliminate the enemies of the state, a precog girl must confront terrifying supernatural forces in order to save her family.
Sophie Leonard just claimed a review for a television script
1 week ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.