Lief Johnson

Aspiring Screenwriter

Reviewer Rating:
Screenplays: 1
Reviews: 1
Enjoys:

Short Bio

Hi there! I'm Lief (pronounced Leaf). I'm an aspiring screenwriter looking for ways to improve future projects. I currently have one full-length screenplay under my belt, which you can give feedback on right here!

Recent Activity

Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a feature script
5 months ago
Nutmeg feature
Genre: Comedy
An unconventional therapist who finds he better understands his patients while tripping on nutmeg must now diagnose and cure an apocalyptic disorder known as metapsychosis, as his increasingly psychedelic journey makes it difficult to discern the real from the unreal.
6 months ago
reviews
105 pages
Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a feature script
7 months ago
The Return feature
Genre: Thriller
After a girl is taken, a police officer comes home to help find her. She was on leave because she was taken, too. Now she's hunting the killer that hunted her.
7 months ago
2 reviews
90 pages
Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a television script
7 months ago
Westphall tv series
Genre: Comedy
A simple background character from a sitcom learns that his television world is just one of many.
9 months ago
2 reviews
37 pages
Lief Johnson uploaded a feature screenplay
7 months ago
Matryoshka feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When corrupt officials mix with the supernatural, it's bound to get interesting.
7 months ago
reviews
117 pages
Lief Johnson completed a review for
7 months ago
Finding Milana short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Review Rating:
How Far Will a Father Go For His Daughter's Soul?

This is a really cool concept, but to be fair, it does have its cliches, specifically the "parent doing anything to save their child" cliche. The first few pages really dragged me in. You cut right to the action from line one, which I really enjoyed. The scenes flowed nicely, and I didn't find myself having to backtrack to figure out what was going on. The use of somewhat minimal dialogue is a nice touch, it really keeps the focus on the action, and not on some wisecrack or something. The only real complaint about flow is it seems too slow near the end. Just my opinion, anyway. I thought the ending was really sweet, even if it leaves some questions to be answered. This was a very good read, and I think if you made those improvements you'd be ready to shoot!

10 months ago
2 reviews
13 pages
Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a short script
7 months ago
Finding Milana short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
How Far Will a Father Go For His Daughter's Soul?
10 months ago
2 reviews
13 pages
Lief Johnson just joined ScriptMother!
7 months ago

Screenplays

Matryoshka
Feature

Draft #1 | Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When corrupt officials mix with the supernatural, it's bound to get interesting.
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7 months ago | reviews | 117 pages
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Lief Johnson

Aspiring Screenwriter

Reviewer Rating:
Screenplays: 1
Reviews: 1
Enjoys:

Short Bio

Hi there! I'm Lief (pronounced Leaf). I'm an aspiring screenwriter looking for ways to improve future projects. I currently have one full-length screenplay under my belt, which you can give feedback on right here!

Screenplays

Matryoshka
Feature

Draft #1 | Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When corrupt officials mix with the supernatural, it's bound to get interesting.
Rating is only available to members
7 months ago | reviews | 117 pages
SHOW MORE

Matryoshka
Feature

Draft #1 | Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When corrupt officials mix with the supernatural, it's bound to get interesting.
Rating is only available to members
7 months ago | reviews | 117 pages
SHOW MORE

Reviews

Rating is only available to members
10 months ago | 2 reviews | 13 pages
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Rating is only available to members
10 months ago | 2 reviews | 13 pages
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Recent Activity

Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a feature script
5 months ago
Nutmeg feature
Genre: Comedy
An unconventional therapist who finds he better understands his patients while tripping on nutmeg must now diagnose and cure an apocalyptic disorder known as metapsychosis, as his increasingly psychedelic journey makes it difficult to discern the real from the unreal.
6 months ago
reviews
105 pages
Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a feature script
7 months ago
The Return feature
Genre: Thriller
After a girl is taken, a police officer comes home to help find her. She was on leave because she was taken, too. Now she's hunting the killer that hunted her.
7 months ago
2 reviews
90 pages
Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a television script
7 months ago
Westphall tv series
Genre: Comedy
A simple background character from a sitcom learns that his television world is just one of many.
9 months ago
2 reviews
37 pages
Lief Johnson uploaded a feature screenplay
7 months ago
Matryoshka feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When corrupt officials mix with the supernatural, it's bound to get interesting.
7 months ago
reviews
117 pages
Lief Johnson completed a review for
7 months ago
Finding Milana short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Review Rating:
How Far Will a Father Go For His Daughter's Soul?

This is a really cool concept, but to be fair, it does have its cliches, specifically the "parent doing anything to save their child" cliche. The first few pages really dragged me in. You cut right to the action from line one, which I really enjoyed. The scenes flowed nicely, and I didn't find myself having to backtrack to figure out what was going on. The use of somewhat minimal dialogue is a nice touch, it really keeps the focus on the action, and not on some wisecrack or something. The only real complaint about flow is it seems too slow near the end. Just my opinion, anyway. I thought the ending was really sweet, even if it leaves some questions to be answered. This was a very good read, and I think if you made those improvements you'd be ready to shoot!

10 months ago
2 reviews
13 pages
Lief Johnson just claimed a review for a short script
7 months ago
Finding Milana short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
How Far Will a Father Go For His Daughter's Soul?
10 months ago
2 reviews
13 pages
Lief Johnson just joined ScriptMother!
7 months ago