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Battle Of The Bands (vampires vrs zombies)

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By Van Lutz
Horror

A newly transformed vampire band's last chance at happiness and freedom comes when they enter the battle of the bands. But, will they survive to get to the last round?

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Draft #1
Peer Rating: 50%
Industry Rating: N/A
2 Reviews | 120 pages | 3 weeks ago | Draft 1

Summary

In 2299, humans are almost extinct. Vampires are the ruling class. Zombies are... zombies.

Battle of the Bands is a horror movie, with plenty of gore. But, it's much more. It's a human story about vampires and zombies. The best films include heart. Like Warm Bodies is much more than a zombie film. Many versions of Dracula is much more than a vampire picture. Battle of the Bands combines it all. Hopefully you'll be cheering by the end.

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Peer Reviews

Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - Although there are several different movies and stories where it's a battle of vampires against zombies, I like that you made yours into a battle of the bands style that adds more uniqueness to the tired concept.

2. Story - The story was decent, albeit a bit predictable. However, with the script being 120 pages and with the story you went for, it feels like it ends up dragging unfortunately...

3 weeks ago | read more...
Cyle Brooks Top Reviewer
I'll start off by saying that I think you're an excellent writer, I just think your story needs some work to bring out its full potential.

Pros:
*I liked how you used internet videos to wordlessly explain the state of the world. The video "last piece of beef" told me a lot about the world.
*You've created a really gross and disgusting world, which seems to be the point, so great job! It reminds me of my first time playing the game The Last...

2 weeks ago | read more...
Jonathan Barbour Top Reviewer

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