HE IS HERE
A traumatised former lawyer feels a constant terrifying presence and struggles to understand if it is real or a product of his own mind.
A psychological horror short movie with a plot twist that explains everything, yet (hopefully) makes the viewer even more unsettled.
I’m of the opinion that any bad story can be salvaged. I would never tell a writer to toss the whole script out and try again. If this writer BELIEVES in this story with their heart, then I encourage them to make it work; and i’m here reviewing scripts because I LOVE film and I know...
he is here notes aug2019
he is here ---- im thinking old tz ep
tz - dennis hopper
he's alive - serling wrote
reading -- odd - i seem always to start with sound before FADE IN
give an atmospheric aural sensation first
scene descrip - show us --- this isnt a novel
pg2 He is extremely paranoid.
pg3 --- he just had a...
A Play In One Act
Written By: Tyler Stone
CAST OF CHARACTERS
Malcolm Burton: An arrogant academically advanced Teen who is best described as a wolf in sheep’s clothing
Vinny Hopkins: Teen who is a conspiracy theory fanatic and also believes that the government is after him and all of those around him.
Olivia Frazier: Teen who is believed to be physic but in reality is just one big co...
The characters need ironing out - they sound far too similar and there are no surprises to any of them. For example July and Lucy could easily be the same person, as could the psychiatrist and Jack's boss. Think about using a piece of personal history, such as...