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#Crime #Family

By Reece Allen

Follows the life of a young Northern Irish loyalist paramilitary member and his ex-paramilitary uncle in prison.

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1 Reviews | 29 pages | 4 years ago | Draft 1
#Dark #Ireland ##pilot episode ##family ##drama #Action and Crime
In a small Northern Ireland town, a loyalist paramilitary group called the UVF takes the law into their own hands. A young member named Leo dances between everyday life and crime. His uncle Dec, an ex-paramilitary member, serves time in prison, but things worsen when a new batch of inmates join.

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Decent first draft pilot episode just needs a bit of revising
Overall, this is a decent first draft for the pilot episode of Antrim. The only things I would really recommend focusing on for the second draft would be cutting down on the action lines, making them shorter, as well as cutting out any repetitive or unnecessary dialogue. Good luck!
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