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#Family #Drama

By Padamshree bhati

Trisha, who has been struggling alone with PTSD, finally confronts her mom but gets a surprise at the end.

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1 Reviews | 8 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1
#Teen #PTSD ##family #Indian #Emotional Climax
a girl with some past childhood trauma, who has always been hiding her emotions and true feelings, finally confronts her mother about the trauma and how her parents' complicated relationship made things difficult.

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Forgot the Truth and Formatting
1) How this got past the first fifteen where formatting is supposed to be checked is beyond me. This isn't a screenplay at all. The first thing you need to do is learn how to format a screenplay.
2) This is filled with misspellings, poor punctuation (worse than mine).
3) You need to start slow and end strong. Build to the reveal of abuse.
4) Watch videos of real victims speaking about their trauma and PTSD. Nothing in this rings true.

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