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Her brother's Birthday


Magdalen pretends on her brother's 12th birthday that he is alive, to celebrate with him.

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Magdalen is writes a letter, which spins off the story. She brings up an idea to do whatever he wanted for his birthday to which he chooses to build a kite. They go through obstacles before arriving at a completed kite. She realizes that her brother had died a long time ago.

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