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Angels Can Die

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By Kwesi Lewis
Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Mystery/Suspense,Horror

A young priest, bound with the devil, journeys toward self-discovery and ultimately finds God.

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Peer Rating: 64%
Industry Rating: N/A
2 Reviews | 64 pages | 4 months ago | Draft 1

Summary

A young church Father has to confront his past to meet his future. But the future he meets is worse than anything he could have imagined. It's a literal battle between light and dark, angels vs demons. The possibility for failure is overwhelming especially when God has removed himself from the battlefield.

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I'm going to get the elephant in the room out of the way first-- I'm not religious. As such, I'm not usually a fan of the exorcism/demon possession genre, since it tends to rely on Christian plot devices that I'm not overly familiar with. So when I say that I enjoyed this script, I really mean it. The main character and his motives were interesting, and the way the world was set up fascinated me in a way that most other stories in this genre rare...

3 months ago | read more...
Overall, a really appealing story and very marketable. I think there's a very good balance of drama and thrilling action, but I think the suspense can be engineered a little better. Yes, we know this is about demons and the inner struggle between good and evil, and there is a lot of information packed in with all the different factions in the storyline. But, I think if you're able to remove a lot of the pointless dialogue you'll have more room to...

2 months ago | read more...
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