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Coloful Shadows

short
By Joe Munsterman
Horror

After a seemingly random killing, an ambitious teenager surveils the strangers in his town despite his mom’s new too-good-to-be-true boyfriend's demands.

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Peer Rating: N/A
Industry Rating: 27%
1 Reviews | 1 pages | 2 weeks ago | Draft 1

Summary

This is a one page short/proof of concept for an opening scene that I hope to expand into a feature.

Industry Reviews

For being a single page script, it's not a terrible first draft, but it's in desperate need of expanding and building up on the story and two characters so that this short script can become something really great. Good luck!

2 weeks ago | read more...
Cyle Brooks Top Reviewer

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