I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
In 1922, A lonely man rides back home for Christmas on a cold dark woods. He is forced to take a diversion where he meets a woman who maybe not what she says.
Following a childhood trauma, a man who hasn’t stepped foot outside his home in 15 years starts to question his sanity as the only haven he knows transforms into a haunted house when his brother tries to force him out.
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