So, I read parts 1 and 2, but this seems fully disconnected from them, (and they from each other), so I'm not sure who "The Couple" is... The couples in all of your 10-page shorts don't end up together, and the overarching alien religious theme (barely hinted at in this one - as if only to establish that they take place in the same world) doesn't do anything to connect these thematically or serve a purpose except to establish that the world is n...

Overall, the story was interesting since it deals with a modern dilemma for women. However, instead of the same old story, adding the supernatural element, Aeon, made it different. I can see this as a series.