Nancy Whitman and her family move into a new home to care for Walter Evans, a vegetated former priest. Shortly after a dark presence reveals itself, and not all is as it may seem..
This is actually quite good, especially for a first attempt at a script (it's an unfinished work in progress). The writing of course can be tighter and there's some formatting issues here and there that I mention in my notes. Some of the dialogue feels forced only serving as exposition to relay information to the audience -- them talking about why they have to move as they're on their way to their new home, for instance. This would've been discus...
Massay, a bullied teen, must survive the night with his friends and family in the Pine Barrens when the Jersey Devil chooses them to be his next contestants in its game of cat and mouse while coming to terms with his abusive father and learning the truth behind the Jersey Devil lore.
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