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Speaking To The Dead

By Van Lutz

A young girl, devastated by her mother's murder, works with her spirit to bring her killer to justice, before anyone else dies.

Draft #2
Draft #1
Peer Rating: 80%
Industry Rating: 67%
Draft 2: 80%
Draft 1: 93%
2 Reviews | 92 pages | 2 months ago | Draft 2


Could be shot lo-budget, minimal cast and locations.

Industry Reviews

overall, a very solid suspense/horror script. I definitely think it's worth submitting to competitions

3 weeks ago |
Script Mother Top Reviewer
Overall, a very entertaining and thrilling read. The setup is very heartwarming, and you give the audience a reason to see Jeanie's story through to the end. I would definitely rework the angle you're taking with the massive twist at the end. The context and reasoning behind Danny's betrayal needs to be worth the shocking reveal. The climax is well written and very action packed, but it needs something more behind it.

3 months ago |
Script Mother Top Reviewer

Peer Reviews

Fun story, but needs more tension and immediate stakes throughout to keep the pressure, plot and characters moving forward.

2 months ago |
Charles Williams Top Reviewer
I've read many scripts on many review sites. This is one of the best. I could see this being a movie. More importantly a movie I'd enjoy.

5 months ago |
Karen Acklee Top Reviewer
This was an easy read. You might want to have someone proof read it. There were some grammatical and punctuation errors. It could use a nice polishing. You must have worked extremely hard on this script. It could be made into a very good movie. I wish you the best of luck with it.

5 months ago |
Kenny Athelstan Top Reviewer

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