The Cosmic Binary
An ex police officer, while trying to reconcile his past with his present, searches for an elusive murderer across space and time.
This is a unique murder mystery story with a science fiction twist. Think Inception meets Looper meets Blade Runner.
The concept is definitely original and has great potential to be an amazing scifi, action thriller.
- Does the logline/first ten pages draw the reader?
I don't particularly think the logline paints how deeply scifi this script is, which may leave it open to a larger demographic, but ultimately may not draw in the right reader.
The first ten pages don't do the story much justice, there was too much linge...