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By Bruce Vancamp

After learning that an elite art school is offering a scholarship and that applications for it are due in less than a day, a struggling painter tries to create the perfect work for submission in a bid to win it.

Draft #2
Peer Rating: 73%
Industry Rating: N/A
Draft 2: 73%
Draft 1: 47%
1 Reviews | 16 pages | 3 weeks ago | Draft 2


A short film about an artist racing against a clock to perfect his painting with elements of magical realism.

Industry Reviews

Peer Reviews

An interesting and fun short. Fun to read, engaging and left me wanting to hear more from our characters. A little niche but who doesn't like to learn things from what they read and watch.

3 weeks ago |
Concept: I thought the concept was pretty strong for a short. The idea of the painting personified and guiding Rick was original and creative.

The story is where the short goes off a little bit. There's nothing really wrong with the progression, it's just that the middle of the story drags on for awhile. The part where he's getting no sleep and it's only broken up by a little bit of shenanigans from the paint brush really stalls the s...

7 months ago |
Ulysses Macargen Top Reviewer

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