For the Boys television
#Drama
By
Austin
Coble
The series explores the lives of four gay black friends through their friendship, their flourishing careers and their personal lives while living in the Atlanta scene.
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32 pages |
3 years ago
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Draft 1
Four Boys is a series about four African American gay friends and the lives that they live. Each episode will have stories and arcs about the relationships, personal lives and careers of four gay best friends and how it affects them and each other. The series will follow the four main characters Ray, Cameron, Donavon and Xavier who have been best friends since college.
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Well, so far your descriptions are a bit too wordy and so is a lot of your dialogue. There isn't really a flow in how your characters talk just yet. If you can slim down a lot of what's being said to 1 or 2 lines of dialogue you'll have a better rhythm in their conversation and it you'll have a much snappier script to read through.
The banter between the characters is good though, it takes a little while to get a proper feel for a few of the...
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