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By Abby LaMarre
Action/Adventure

With the help of a mermaid, a widow sets out on a voyage across the Atlantic to find her husband after he drowns on the Titanic.

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Nominee
Draft #1
Peer Rating: 53%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 23 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1

Summary

Incomplete rough draft.

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Peer Reviews

Wow, this story has the bones of a prime time series. Even though some may see the story as derivative; 'Once Upon A Time', it is this readers opinion that with the marketability and writers unique voice on this story, that there is truly a chance to make this a reality. That being said i have many critiques and hope they only further your story and your personal style. Most of your 'mistakes', were commonly repeated. Showing not a lack of skill...

2 years ago | read more...
David Weishaar Top Reviewer

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