Singular - "Abs0lute Zer0"
A dream-chasing loner is forced to refocus when his colleague becomes prime suspect to a deadly cyber-virus attack. Veil Corp need a scapegoat and his obsession with clearing her name has put them both in its crosshairs.
A young man obsessed with making money to fund his goal of permanently uploading to an online world known as The Veil, is thrown off his game when a Cyber Virus attack at his workplace causes him to cross paths with his mysterious new neighbour. He is about to find out that everyone is harbouring dangerous secrets.
It had a feel of "In Time" meets "Black Mirror" (I remember an episode where you earn credits through what you do and who you know - Love the series), meet Elysium.
On the first page already, I know who Zaff is, late, rushed. He's going to make life difficult for Liam. Not because he's a bad person, he's just really disorganized. This setup works great for later when Li...
Here are my comments. Take them or leave them. However, I hope they're constructive.
DOES THE SCRIPT SET EACH SCENE?
Yes. Yet, you tell rather than show.
--For example: pg2: “…a surprisingly high-tech computer system.” Describing this computer system—without going into infinite detail—and what makes it “surprisingly high-tech” would be showing.
--Also: pg4: “…strange gl...