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Good Morning, Mr. Kay

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By Emily (E.M.P.) Phillips
Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama

Mr. Kay, a forlorn surgeon, finds comfort in an unusual therapist named Eve, a strange creature that lives in the interdimensional realm of White Space.

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Peer Rating: 53%
Industry Rating: N/A
Draft 6: 53%
Draft 3: 70%
1 Reviews | 91 pages | 1 week ago | Draft 6

Summary

Mr. Kay, a forlorn surgeon, finds comfort in an unusual therapist named Eve, a strange creature that lives in the interdimensional realm of White Space.

Industry Reviews

Peer Reviews

First of all, I really admire the concept behind this script. It’s twisty and science fiction- packed. I know some of the phrases that I just used don’t exist in the English Vocabulary but your style of crafting a science fiction thriller is really out of the ordinary or another word I would use, unique. The characters were well developed. For example, Creature Blu. At first, I thought it was a light hearted comedy but little did I know, it evolv...

4 hours ago | read more...
Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - This was a very interesting concept. To have a man enter a "white space" dimension to escape reality is intriguing to say the least. Although similar ideas have been done, I was interested to see where you would take this.

2. Story - Although it was a bit slower paced, the story was a nice one to read. Me. Kay's journey and how it ends was satisfying. However, the shock ending with the Pord...

1 week ago | read more...
Cyle Brooks Top Reviewer
I could write three different reviews on this screenplay. I’ll start with describing my first impressions from reading the beginning of the story. The concept is engaging. The story has a surreal spiritual quality. At first, I imagined it could be made into a unique animated film. The White Space and the creatures are presented well, being a strength in the screenplay. The whole white space scene with creatures is only limited by the writer’s ima...

2 weeks ago | read more...
Paul Vecchiet Top Reviewer

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