The last two survivors of an alien attack on a remote space station try to escape, but where can they go?
I see this as a stand-alone episode for a half hour sci-fi/fantasy/horror tv series a la Twilight Zone. It may also be part of an anthology feature (along with my other short Vector) whose working title is Heroines.
Regina moves fro...
The beggining of act one, pages 2 to 6, is less stellar in my opinion. It's basically exposition.
Pages 7 and 8. I didn't get the conversation with the Woman. At the very least it lacked conflict. And the resolution, the "I'm sorry" came out of nowhere.
Page 13. It is disappointed that this series of shots aren't developed more. Instead of the two...
1. Concept - I really liked the idea of a crew being stuck inside of an alien like creature that have fallen under from its gas. I also enjoyed you adding trypophobia into this to add more to the horror.
2. Story - The story, while not the most original, was still very well written out. It was clean, intriguing, and knew where it was going.
3. Structure - The formatting and structuring is incredibly cl...