This is one of a series of shorts about this character. Jane Killian is a martial artist, a mother, and a women's self-defense instructor. She loves her son and her students, she does her best to like everyone else. The two things she passionately cannot stand are shoes and bullies. As such, she she goes barefoot whenever she gets the chance, and she will throw a punch if she feels she has to. The goal of these shorts is to create a female hero who is decent, caring, human, fallible, relatable, tough, and totally able to kick butt when she has to!
1. Concept - The concept of "rape-revenge" isn't original for Hollywood, but I did like that you added the spin of the main character being a self-defense teacher/motivator.
2. Story - The story was simple for what it was and it was told well for the most part. The only thing that kind of took me away from it was its predictability. Adding a few more twists would make for a more interesting overall story....
The end part of the story is amazing. The way Marry decide to teach the lesson to rapist but with the legal terms. It gives message to society that people could punish to the guilty person, but the method should be in the right manner...