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Aberrant

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By mike harper
Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Romance,Drama

In a world much like ours, a woman is pulled into events that will forever change her life on her 25th birthday.

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Draft #6
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Draft #2
Peer Rating: N/A
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Draft 6: 67%
Draft 5: 13%
Draft 4: 77%
0 Reviews | 116 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 7

Summary

In 2020, in a world much like ours, there are humans and anthropomorphic people, Isabella dreams of a man she does not know. On her birthday she's forced into a government program. That's when her life changes forever.

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Peer Reviews

THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH OPENING THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT, SO I COULD NOT READ IT! I'M SORRY FOR NOT GIVING ANY PROPER FEEDBACK. GOOD LUCK TO THE WRITER AND THIS STROY.

THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH OPENING THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT, SO I COULD NOT READ IT! I'M SORRY FOR NOT GIVING ANY PROPER FEEDBACK. GOOD LUCK TO THE WRITER AND THIS STROY.

THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH OPENING THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT, SO I COULD NOT READ IT! I'M SORRY FOR...

9 months ago | read more...
If your goal was to write x-rated furry propaganda then you've succeeded. Anything else was a complete miss. I'm writing this review assuming it's not supposed to be furry porn. If it is, then ignore everything else.

The concept is mostly just furries fucking and getting raped with social commentary about the government interfering in people's lives and something about people's perverted nature. The social commentary is unclear but the writer...

9 months ago | read more...
I love the script and the type of genre of the story it has. I love the idea of you getting inspiration and getting inspired from a book you read. I love the way you put as must detail as possible into your script including amazing words in the script. I also like how you underline some of the words you picked out in your script to put lines under them. I also like the parts in the script that the character is starting the day. I love the concept...

9 months ago | read more...
The concept and the story of your script is strong and compelling from the first ten pages. I felt gripped by the story very quickly. The hypothetical crisis of fertility in the fictional world was the story's strongest aspect. The characters did well to reflect the ideological struggle that motivated their actions. I also found the world created to be interesting and immersive. The chemistry between characters was well detailed and the nuances o...

9 months ago | read more...
"Let's get one thing straight... I'm a queen."

I hate to tear apart someone's art like this, but the game of criticism consists of honesty. And I can honestly say that this was hard to read through. If anything this works better being on sites like FanFiction.net or Wattpad, maybe even be adapted into a DeviantArt webcomic, who knows?

I guess the main question is: Who is this for? I can see the young adult dystopian angle, but the constant...

9 months ago | read more...

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