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Vengeance Wore Black

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By D Ray Van
Western,Drama,Thriller

After cheating death several times, a gang of murderous outlaws is confident a holy relic will protect them from permanent harm, but when the Rider comes, seeking retribution, will death finally win this hand?

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Draft #1
Peer Rating: 67%
Industry Rating: N/A
Draft 2: 67%
Draft 1: 100%
1 Reviews | 122 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 2

Summary

The Rider trails four murderers to Silver Rock City, where he confronts and kills two in a shootout at the saloon before being killed himself. An hour later, he revives and has another shootout, killing another and gravely wounding the other before he is killed again. The wounded man performs a Hopi ritual and chant with a stolen Hopi prayer stick over the bodies of his dead comrades. They revive and hightail it out of town. An hour later, the Rider revives, mounts up, and rides out, trailing them to a farm for the final showdown.

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Peer Reviews

I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW...

9 months ago | read more...
This script was so well written that I read it twice! My only complaint it was too short. The vivid imagery and dialogue pulled me into the western world timepiece the movie is set in. The dusty roads, the broken shod on the horse, the reality of the people in a drought and farmsteads. You left me wondering about a few questions. How did the Father come into possession of the Shaman staff and knowing the chant for the resurrection of the dead? Ho...

9 months ago | read more...
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