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The Anti-Christ Kid

short
By Erez Bailen
Mystery/Suspense,Thriller,Drama

A ghostly, demon like X-Men type story with the beginning starts in a foggy day. Then a girl has an X-men demon type experience.

Approved
Nominee
Draft #2
Peer Rating: 31%
Industry Rating: N/A
Draft 2: 31%
3 Reviews | 5 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 2

Summary

Rose is a girl who's powers are not normal

Industry Reviews

Peer Reviews

I liked the concept of this story, although its still in somewhat rough shape. It'll be interesting to see where he takes the characters since we only get a glimpse.

The structure definitely needs worked on, luckily that's an area where you can find loads of help online. Some things I can see off the bat would be "Fade in" at the beginning, your action lines are in all CAPS, character introduction needs to be established before their first lin...

1 year ago | read more...
Eddie Listisen Top Reviewer
If this is to be a screenplay, the writer must format their work into an acceptable format for any serious consideration that the would want for this horror concept. It is an interesting thread to pull, but the writer need's to build more context between the parents before the act on the last page. If this is the triggering "event" for the story of a full movie, it needs to be on page14-15 that builds up to the father's fate.

The needs to be s...

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Reid Barwick Top Reviewer
I don't have much to say about this script because it's very short and clearly intended to have a continuation as this is only part 1. However, I'll say this; it's an interesting concept that could be executed very well if done with more care. I liked how you presented the mystical aspects of the story. Firstly, when we see the baby in the basket, a sense of ambiguity is present. It already hooks the reader. Secondly, Rose displaying her powers a...

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