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The Cosmic Binary

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By Bruce Vancamp
Sci-Fi/Fantasy

An ex police officer, while trying to reconcile his past with his present, searches for an elusive murderer across space and time.

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Peer Rating: 34%
Industry Rating: N/A
2 Reviews | 113 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1

Summary

This is a unique murder mystery story with a science fiction twist. Think Inception meets Looper meets Blade Runner.

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Peer Reviews

- Is the Concept strong/original?
The concept is definitely original and has great potential to be an amazing scifi, action thriller.

- Does the logline/first ten pages draw the reader?
I don't particularly think the logline paints how deeply scifi this script is, which may leave it open to a larger demographic, but ultimately may not draw in the right reader.

The first ten pages don't do the story much justice, there was too much linge...

9 months ago | read more...
The story is an interesting idea of moving between dimensions and the future even though I didn't truly understand the technology that was capable of it, I only got the impression of the Binary Drive but didn't get it off the page. This is because the script lacks the show don't tell elements you'd expect from a visual medium. About 75% of the exposition comes across in dialogue and not in pictures, and a lack of subtext surrounding all this expo...

9 months ago | read more...
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