Wanna See
0

Till death do us part

Short

A disgruntled husband plans his revenge on his family while someone makes plans for him.

Approved
Rating is only available to members
Horror | 1 Reviews | 7 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1

Summary

Four character thriller with a twist ending. Entire script takes place in a house.

Reviews

The concept is interesting. You are quickly drawn into the story which obviously is essential given that the script is a short one. The scenes are well-written overall, with possibly some scope for tightening up the first half page, ideally cut down on the early action description set up regarding the shower scene which is a little dragged out.
The scene where the dad confront the bickering girls is very well written. This scene will be famili...

2 months ago | read more...

Recommended for You

With a limited menu two men must make a very difficult decision.
A paranormal investigator gets more than he bargained for after encountering a mysterious statue in an abandoned haunted theme park.
After an alcohol fueled night, a man wakes up to discover he has been kidnapped into a modern day Gladiator ring, and must fight in order to stay alive.