Kill Me
Short
A dying woman begs her competition to put her out of her misery.
Approved
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1 Reviews |
8 pages |
10 months ago
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Draft 2
Summary
Leslie and Kate are not friends at all. They should be enemies but on her sick bed, Leslie invites Kate to help take her life.
Reviews
My particular areas of concern are in that some sections of dialogue feel as though they are simply filler....where I think the script would have a bit more emotional punch if it cuts right to the point and maybe expands on the theme of assisted suicide just a bit. The text message portion the script was a bit hard for me to grasp and it seems as though the conversation might be meant to be a bit ambiguous. Intentional on your part perhaps? I w...
10 months ago
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John Aldrich
