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Straight On 'Til Short

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Auguste runs away from home to avoid growing up and does the one thing no child should ever do.

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Genre: Thriller
No. Reviews: 2 | Length: 7 pages
Published: 2 weeks ago

Summary

A dark social commentary on the influence of media use over children told through the lens of a contemporary spin on the origin of Captain Hook

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This was weird and disturbing, but it did hold my interest. The only thing I didn’t like about it was that it’s slanderous toward Peter Pan, but I’ve had that same problem Peter Pan that was addressed in this script before.

  • 2 weeks ago
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  • 4

Concept is fair. Actually I was trying to understand it.
Plot is not good. It could be made so much better. Dialogue is good. Characters aren't very interesting. The first page actually kept me going but as it progresses, it went out of shape.
Climax is... I do not know.
Question is why did he do it?

  • 1 week ago
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  • 2.5