A Yuletide Masque Feature

By Master-Clown

Within a medieval English castle awaits an old festival celebrating the shortest day.


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Genre: Musical
No. Reviews: 1 | Length: 44 pages
Published: 3 weeks ago


Picture an old-time English midwinter celebration.

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Concept is not strong enough.
The first ten pages did not draw me in. It wasn't interesting at all.
I can't tell how well scenes are written since its all dancing and singing and I don't know how the singing goes.
If there is a protagonist, I don't see it.
The protagonist has no clear goal. If there is one, I don't see it.
There is no conflict and the climax just didn't make up.

  • 1 week ago
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  • 1.5