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Tee Party

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A hand places a golf ball on a tee. It belongs to JK ...

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Drama | 1 Reviews | 11 pages | 3 months ago | Draft 1

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The story takes place overnight at the golf club and includes the dialogue between the two main characters, JK and SANJAY.

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Concept is not good. Plot is good. The characters are real. The dialogue is a thumbs up. The action seems real enough but would have been better if there is conflict.
Climax is good.

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