Speaking In Tongues
Short
Did you hear the one about the magician and the faith healer?
Approved
Comedy |
1 Reviews |
17 pages |
8 months ago |
Draft 1
Summary
I want to eventually shoot this. But, I'd like thoughts. The one thing you don't have to mention, because I know already, my punctuation sucks.
Reviews
This was supposed to be true event but it felt more like I was reading a comical unbelievable story.
The concept is not that interesting to me.
And the first five pages was torture. Perhaps if you had opened with Steve performing his famous trick with an audience, it would have been better. And some of the scenes weren't good. The part were Steve and Barry were trying to make Maddy laugh looked real amateurish. Try acting that part out with yo...
The concept is not that interesting to me.
And the first five pages was torture. Perhaps if you had opened with Steve performing his famous trick with an audience, it would have been better. And some of the scenes weren't good. The part were Steve and Barry were trying to make Maddy laugh looked real amateurish. Try acting that part out with yo...
8 months ago |
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