A young woman finds out that the biological father she's never known is terminally ill. One of his final requests is to see her before he passes.
A touching short about a father and daughter relationship that only gets a chance to blossom towards the end of the father's life.
The characters seem genuine. Particularly Lily who is understandably “not about” seeing her bio-dad. My issues come with Tim as he feels very flat. His reasoning for not being in her life comes off as one giant excuse. I don’t know how she isn’t able to see this Sorry I was an a...
In all, the script does read well.
Great job Benny.