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Tenants

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By Kristopher MacNeill

To maintain control over their lives a pair of sisters from Queens uproot their family's trauma, forcing everyone to face the truth; even if they're not ready.

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Drama | 0 Reviews | 74 pages | 1 month ago | Draft 4

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Lady Bird meets King of Staten Island.

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Uneven, but so long as the bad things are fixed and the good things are expanded upon, it has the potential to be a powerful script.
Concept: First, I would describe your genre as pure drama. Don't call it a comedy, definitely don't call it family. Even though it's about a family, as a genre implies that it's being written for the whole family. A kid's movie like Toy Story or The Lion King are family movies. The logline paints a great picture for a story, incorporating where the conflict is going to come from.

Story: The first 35 pages or so, up to the point where they have...

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