Notify When Found
short
A misguided millennial seeking revenge for a stolen phone finds the thief being buried in the woods.
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Drama,Crime |
1 Reviews |
5 pages |
1 month ago
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Draft 2
Summary
Using an app to find his stolen phone, A young man looking for payback gets more than he bargained for.
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I'll just go over my thoughts in chronological order as I read your script. (I enjoyed it by the way)
1ST PAGE
- Good character intro and description, immediately paints a clear first impression of who Darius is
- Intriguing situation to start off in, following a trail, searching for a phone… (his own maybe ?)
- (OS), Offscreen or over the shoulder? It’s just a detail but the formatting is wrong, not very clear
- The segment where Darius...
1ST PAGE
- Good character intro and description, immediately paints a clear first impression of who Darius is
- Intriguing situation to start off in, following a trail, searching for a phone… (his own maybe ?)
- (OS), Offscreen or over the shoulder? It’s just a detail but the formatting is wrong, not very clear
- The segment where Darius...
1 week ago
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Julián Domínguez
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