The True Haven - Episode 1: Welcome Home
Welcome Liam To The True Haven
The True Haven follows Liam's Struggle as a book that he is writing does not get published. Liam decides that he would put himself in his character's shoes (Who gets lost in the forest) and sets off in the forest. While in the BlackBird Forest he and his friend Jane stumble across a cult nestled high in the BlackBird Forest mountains.
The characters reactions to the events in the story could be more realistic to help engage the reader. There were times when I'd be distracted from the story because I didn't think characte...
Slugline format is not proper. I first started reading and I thought the slugline format could be something new and interesting but as the script progresses, it but came disappointing.
Scenes are not properly fleshed out. Dialogue is good but could be better.
Protagonist has an interesting goal. Climax is not very interesting.