
Temptation of Billy Cooper
An out-of-work cowboy rescues the daughter of a cattle baron from three would-be kidnappers. Maybe he would’ve been better off letting them recapture and ransom her.
Draft #5
Summary
A down-on-his-luck, out-of-work cowboy, Billy Cooper, travels across the open plains toward Colorado Springs, CO, seeking work at the Bucking-R ranch. When still a day’s ride out, Billy stops for rest and water at a nearby stream. He sees three horsemen chasing a woman and gaining. He aims his rifle and fires at the men. They stop and hit the ground. The woman, however, makes a beeline for Billy. He discovers the woman is the Bucking-R owner’s daughter, Carrie James, and the men are kidnappers who want to hold her for ransom. Billy flesh-wounds two of the men and makes his escape with Carrie to a mountain cabin. Before long, the men pursue them. Billy has a shootout with the men and kills all three but is seriously wounded himself. When he returns to the cabin, Carrie nurses his wound. Billy finds a bottle of whiskey, and they both get drunk. While Carrie sleeps, Billy is tempted to molest her but doesn't. Carrie wakes up the next morning and discovers her shirt is unbuttoned, and her bosom is exposed. She immediately suspects Billy of violating her and reminds him that men have disappeared for minor infractions against her. He tries to explain, but Carrie remains suspicious and wants her pa and brothers to sort it out. Carrie orders Billy to escort her home. Billy imagines what will be in store for him if he takes Carrie to the ranch and decides on an alternate scenario.
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"Lustful thoughts creep into his mind" is not needed...
Having said that, I am so glad that I read this. It literally took my breath away. As soon as I realized where the ending was going I became anxious about Carrie's fate and exhilarated at the audacity and cold-blooded nature of his decision.My heart raced. You also strung it ou...
The five characters act believably. This is not a simple tale of white hats vs black hats. The badguys all have enough personality and motivation that they seem believable; we are not actually rooting...
The shot to Theo’s neck needs to be a bit more...
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