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The Return Feature

By CourierNew

After a girl is taken, a police officer comes home to help find her. She was on leave because she was taken, too. Now she's hunting the killer that hunted her.

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Genre: Thriller
No. Reviews: 1 | Length: 90 pages
Published: 4 months ago

Summary

After a girl is taken, a police officer comes home to help find her. She was on leave because she was taken, too. Now she's hunting the killer that hunted her.

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REVIEWS

Concept is not strong enough. It lacks a compelling component.
The first ten pages was completely dull. Nothing was happening.
The protagonist is good but could be better.
The plot is okay but could be better.
The dialogue is good. The script reads well with little or no glitches in terms of formatting and grammatical errors but lacks a solid premise to create an inticing story.
The climax is good but not compelling enough.

  • 1 month ago
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  • 2.5