Everything has a cost. Real magic is different. Magic breaks the laws of the world. Jesse is soon to find out the mage's price.
Need input on plot beat, dialogue, and character development is greatly appreciated. This is the 2nd of a trilogy. The FIRST MAGE is the 1st.movie.
I have a plot outline already, but before I flus it out to the script I want to make sure I'm writing in a way that a movie watcher would be riveted and devour the scenes, characters, and follow a decent plot.