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Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot"

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Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.

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Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense | 2 Reviews | 22 pages | 3 weeks ago | Draft 5

Summary

This story follows Rosh, a sophomore in high school, as his friend Sal tries to convince him to come to their high school's homecoming. As Sal tries to convince Rosh, they recount the events that took place that past year. This leads them to realize how much their life was different from the life their plans.

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This script caught my attention but didn't hold it for long. I think the concept was really good but the actual script dragged on and it was kind of boring. The dialogue wasn't very realistic either and dit felt very forced. If the dialogue was changed a little bit and the story arc was fixed then this would be a pretty good script. There isn't really a plot. I think that Rosh and Sal were a little stereotypical, but it does kind of make sense in...

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The writer attempts to do too many things in this relatively short script. He tries to establish a connection between Rosh and Sal. Although he may be getting to display some unkind adolescent behavior relationship between each other, Rosh may have wanted to decided to move on a long time ago.

There is parts of the script that are unnecessary in trying to develop the characters' behaviors and relationship: i.e. cinematic editing comments. Th...

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