Angels Can Die
A young priest journeys with the devil and finds God.
Father Malcolm's curate is not comfortable with his line of work. It brings back terrifying feelings from a past the curate can hardly remember. But there is a separate world out there that promises to come crashing down on the curate, and force him to confront the things that scare him to death
First of all, I think any story that pocesses anything out of the ordinary should contain a sort of heads up in the beginning. Your story has angels, demons, magic, signs and wonders, etc. I think you should have told us the world you created. Maybe God is resting and handed authority to archangel Michael or something. Maybe he doesn't answer prayers anymore and a group of angels sees it n...