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A Night To Remember: Episode 1 - "Pilot"

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Follow Rosh and his friends during their high school homecoming, as they recount their events to find out when Rosh meets his crush.

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Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense | 2 Reviews | 24 pages | 2 months ago | Draft 5

Summary

This story follows Rosh, a sophomore in high school, as he and his friends Sal and Melanie as they reflect on the events that got them to where they were, their school's homecoming. Rosh, Sal and Melanie also try to piece together the story of how Rosh met his mysterious love interest.

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There just didn't seem to be enough conflict to really care about the story. There were no stakes really. We're kinda just walking through this situation, which is kinda boring, via flashback. There are some plot turns in the narrative -- the Snapchat post being a prank, which makes us suspect it might be Melanie because she's now dating Rosh. But I thought Anna broke up with Rosh for really no reason. Seemed like it was out of nowhere. Didn't se...

1 month ago | read more...
Michael Kospiah Top Reviewer
For the first draft of a twenty four page script, I found it purely okay, I found the main characters, Rosh, Sal and Anna rather unlikeable and unoriginal middle class high school stereotypes, their dialogue was really generic and their personalities rather one dimensional. You should describe the mood and scenery lots more in your second draft. However, on the plus side, I do think the story itself has potential. Your first step should be fleshi...

1 month ago | read more...
Max Stenner Top Reviewer

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Follow Rosh and his friends during their high school homecoming night, as they recount the events that took place during the year.
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